the intro
lacks tune. keep jammin. spend time recording your songs better. focus on your rhythm. layer some guitar. add either really high pitched mellow vox or some hxc fu^ vox. do all that right and you won't even need drums. thanks for the review btw i agree the second chorus synth needs to gtfo. there's serious harmony going on with my vox and you cant even hear it. my balls.
The intro just needs fewer phases. It's too long, and therefore repetitive. I suppose the out of tune feel isn't a proper way to start a song as well.
There's one thing I need to nail into my head: METRONOME METRONOME METRONOME!
Anyway, it was a one hour on-the-spot write and record. If you check out "Starcrossed RE" by muah, you'll see that I have decent internal rhythm, tune, and ability to record when I put in a few weeks effort to practice the song. I'm no pro... I'm more of a lazy bastard that knows nothing about what he's doing. But I'll admit that. ;) I'll be sure to check out some of your other work.
great
enjoyable. love the samples. what did you use to make this?
Just the default stuff that came with FL studio. I changed their pitches around a little bit though ;)
sweet
this is awesome dude. trance music really isnt my style but this is good. love the azn elements.
thanks man! glad you like it.
dude below me said alot..
only thing i wanna back up is you gotta mix up the drums a little bit more.. more than 2 patterns.. you need some breakdowns and stuff... make this thing longer dude its too short.. you could rock this track for like 10 minutes and keep it tasty. also, if you're FL Sudioing... use the hip hop bass because the one your using is weak.
rock
i enjoyed the guitar and a couple of the things you did with the drums. did you use FL studio to make them? i would suggest building up the beginning... it's too much too quick... and i take it that's what you were going for, but it sounds terrible to someone that first puts the song on not knowing what to expect.. especially because they are such low quality samples. besides that i liked it.. def needs vox, a real good breakdown, and a serious guitar solo. keep working on it.
Well possibly "like you said" to someone who won't expect it. but i like the song that way it is. and trust me...this is the best it's gonna get for now...so enjoy it!
sick
this is great dude. you've got such a grasp on the most perfect hip hop sound. at least in terms of stuff i enjoy listening to.
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